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Wednesday, December 8, 2021

My next steps in writing

Kia ora Whanau!

Today in class we took look at our scores from our writing test and we were wondering "What should I do to make this better?" We looked on a slide or teacher shared us and we had to see what we did and what our next steps are in punctuation, vocab, organisation, sentence structure and ideas. 

For punctuation I need to get better at commas, speech marks, capital letters and exclamation marks because all I am doing is full stops and capital letters and isn't that boring? 

For vocab I need to get better at nouns, adjectives and verbs

Monday, December 6, 2021

Snow Day

On a dark snowy night I can see trees with snow on the branches and a dark snowy sky in the background. I can see bushes behind the brown house and the light glimmering on the trees as they go left and right from the wind. I can see the grass on the ground and the snow on the grass like a blanket. As the wind pushes the trees there is a reindeer in the background running like the speed of light and you might wondering where did that reindeer come from? 

The reindeer had a bell wrapped around it's neck like a collar and as it runs you can hear the bell ringing like you wanna sing a song as it runs. Its horns had Christmas light's on it and it looked like it was a beautiful Christmas tree. The reindeer was brown like a chocolate bar and it's eyes were like a golden brown Christmas ornaments. 

You must be wondering why it's running. It's running because it's getting chased by wolves! The reindeer ran like the speed of light and it was calling for help. The wolves looked hungry like it hasn't been eating in 3 weeks. The wolves were gray and they were hungry and starving. The wolves were getting faster and faster every step they take as the reindeer is running as fast as it can.

Will the reindeer escape from the hungry wolves? Or will the reindeer say it's last words? We will find out on Chapter 2! 

In my Wananga class our teacher told us what to write but in our own words and look what came out! I love this story so much because I like how it has Christmasy stuff in there like the reindeer and the snow on the ground. 


 


Business and Enterprise

Kia Ora Readers,

Today, me and my group has been making nebula necklaces. We tried so hard on these necklaces and it was fun. Sadly, we didn't get to complete our task and we had to let all that work go. Because of that, we never got to order the stuff we thought we wouldn't use. At least it was fun because we get to communicate with people we didn't know in our group and we got to make things we didn't make before. Thank you for looking at my blog and make sure to comment. What will you make?