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Wednesday, March 17, 2021

100 word challenge St Patrick day

 Kia ora Whanau!

Today me and my class did a 100 word challenge but St Patrick's day themed! I want to share you my work to see if it's good. Here is my work! It was hard because I had to think of a sentence to start the story.

Once upon a time there was a world where people only wore green

but they got kidnapped by the queen of hearts because she wanted all the lucky leaf clovers to be the luckiest and most powerful person in the world.

1000 years later there is this baby and he is sleeping on a 4 leaf clover!

He woke up and looked confused because he was looking for his mum and dad.

Then he saw these animals pop out of a bush and they say,

“Hello little one we are here to protect you from the queen of hearts till you're all grown up"

Then 20 years later he was a grownup and then he was ready to fight the queen so he went to her castle an to beat her and get the other green people back to their village and they lived happily ever after!


The End


1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Sovereign

    Thank you for sharing your story with us. Unfortunately it is running off the page so we can't read your excellent work! Can you have another check on this formatting?

    - Miss Birtch

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