Kia Ora Whanau,
Today me and my class are sick and tired of going to school without phones so we talked to the kids if they agree or disagree. Some kids say no some kids say yes but that's ok so I wanna share if I disagree or agree.
I agree because if your in trouble like your getting kidnapped or your about to die or something you need your phone to call the police or your mum to get help but if you don't you will probably get killed. When you feel bad you can just go on your phone and just text someone who makes you feel comfortable. When someone dies in your family or your friends you can look at your phone and see the photo's of your family.
Hi Sovereign, I like how you did a nice introduction first and I have also like what you have shared about why year 7/8 should have their cell phones. Maybe next time you could write like say goodbye and maybe also to say thank you for looking at like your work. Ok bye for now :3
ReplyDeleteOk thank you I will think and do that next time :)
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