Kia Ora Whanau,
Once upon a time there as a band that had 4 boy's in the band and they were called Reggie, Alex Luke and Trevor. They were trying to become famous but they weren't that famous. After there song they played 3 of the boy's (Reggie, Alex and Luke) were hungry so they wanted a hot dog. They saw a hot dog stand and they order a hot dog but somehow.
A few minutes later they died by poisoning in there hot dog and Trevor was the only one alive. Years later there was a girl called Julie and she loved music and love her family but mostly she loves her mum because she passed away when she was little. Se lives with her Dad and her little brother and she goes to a school called Los Feliz High School. After she went home she heard a noise in her garage and then the 3 boys who just showed up out of nowhere and the girl screamed and screamed. She tried to tell her Dad but he didn't believe her.
In the Morning she found out that they died in 1995 so she asked them what happened. So they had to do unfinished business. They became friends but then the boys found out that there old friend trevor was old and he stole there old bands songs so that he can get famous so they went to his house and haunted him till he stop making songs. In the end, the boys decided to cross over. They thought that since they died right before performing at the Orpheum, playing that show must be their unfinished business. So, helped by Willie, they secured an opening night gig at the theater and played their hearts out. But after the show, they didn't cross over. The End?
Hi Hope you like the story and make sure to comment what do you think happens in heaven?
Kia ora Sovereign
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing this work to your blog. I am unsure which WGA task this is for, your story seems a lot longer than 100 words, as well, I can't see the photo picture prompt you were writing about.
Can you have another look and check if this is the correct task?
- Miss Birtch